-ADD audio and sound in the beginning and through out.
- there are two different angles of one scene, the editing of the two scenes need to be smoother
- Audio was reduced, Increase it as you can hardly hear what Rebecca is saying
-Do character introductions
- Refilm certain scenes as there is too much eye contact with the screen when filming as well as smiles and giggles
-Take out clips that are not needed and repeated
- Show how she fell on the floor
- Bad background sound, use music or do a voice over
-Random swearing was in the scene as the scene was not part of the film - remove it
-Camera needs to have been used with tripod, footage Shakey
-wind made voice not clear , do a voice over
- At the end there is a spelling corrections needed, add for
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